All day in a car, but with paper, a draft, and a pen.
Story Revised: "Slythe Rotheki"
Level of Revisions: Pen and paper, sentence-level
Pages: 11
Significant Changes: Savaged the first half of a scene, except for a few segments of description to be tacked on later.
Chosen Sentence(s): "The bad memories were here. He sidestepped them. They weren't gone, but they were asleep enough that he could function."
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July 21st and 22nd Progress Notes
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